Rachel, these are a little inconsistent. I really like the one for Oleg, but the others are a little stiff. Part of the problem is in the hand written text. Some just have a birth-death date, others have quotes and stuff. Sid Barrett has the whole "font considered as part of the character of the piece" thing going for it. Think about eliminating the unnecessary text from the others. Also try to marry the text with the image a little better. Use Oleg as your high point and try to re-work the others. What about the half page?
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Rachel, these are a little inconsistent. I really like the one for Oleg, but the others are a little stiff. Part of the problem is in the hand written text. Some just have a birth-death date, others have quotes and stuff. Sid Barrett has the whole "font considered as part of the character of the piece" thing going for it. Think about eliminating the unnecessary text from the others. Also try to marry the text with the image a little better. Use Oleg as your high point and try to re-work the others. What about the half page?
---->d
Whoops, I missed the half page at first glance. I like the "Death Clock" idea. Good stuff!
---->d.
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