Angela, looks like you like drawing Shelly Winters a lot. The drawings of her are nice, inspired even, but the others fall flat and don't really move beyond observation/photo study. I have a clear idea of how you intend to treat the line, and I see notes on frame-like borders, but it's unclear what your intentions are. The place where something good is happening is in the half page intro. The hourglass is a good idea. I suggest you consider something to tie it to the individual portraits. In the future please do sketches that are more complete, and post them a little earlier in the evening. Re-post something that will give us a better idea of what youre doing so we can see something solid on Wednesday.
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Angela, looks like you like drawing Shelly Winters a lot. The drawings of her are nice, inspired even, but the others fall flat and don't really move beyond observation/photo study. I have a clear idea of how you intend to treat the line, and I see notes on frame-like borders, but it's unclear what your intentions are. The place where something good is happening is in the half page intro. The hourglass is a good idea. I suggest you consider something to tie it to the individual portraits. In the future please do sketches that are more complete, and post them a little earlier in the evening. Re-post something that will give us a better idea of what youre doing so we can see something solid on Wednesday.
Thanks--->d.
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