Good portraits. I also really like the intro half page piece. If you're doing these as sort of "haunted house" portraits, you need to resolve the frames you use on each. Nice job so far. tighten up the frames.
the way you're using the brown and white together is subtle, but very effective, and very nice. i agree that the frames could use the attention to detail that you paid in the people. the likeness are also really well done, im not even in this group and I can tell who they are. their personalities are well presented, but maybe even some decorative elements in the frames could make their personalities shine a little more, and serve to make the frames a little more interesting. -ashley
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Good portraits. I also really like the intro half page piece. If you're doing these as sort of "haunted house" portraits, you need to resolve the frames you use on each. Nice job so far. tighten up the frames.
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the way you're using the brown and white together is subtle, but very effective, and very nice. i agree that the frames could use the attention to detail that you paid in the people. the likeness are also really well done, im not even in this group and I can tell who they are. their personalities are well presented, but maybe even some decorative elements in the frames could make their personalities shine a little more, and serve to make the frames a little more interesting.
-ashley
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