Robbie, these are beautiful. Nice work. The only thing I'd re-think is the font you used on the half-page. It seems a little squeezed in there and stiff. Try to make the figures on the half page flow a bit more too.
hey robbie, these sketches are quite beautiful. the color choices are well thought out and so are the formats of the spots that you've done. they are very consistant, and that's pretty important. i agree with dan about the text being sort of crammed on the half page. and if i were you, i'd put some more detail into the flowers on that page, or rather treat them the same as you did the figures on top of them. nice work though
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Robbie, these are beautiful. Nice work. The only thing I'd re-think is the font you used on the half-page. It seems a little squeezed in there and stiff. Try to make the figures on the half page flow a bit more too.
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hey robbie, these sketches are quite beautiful. the color choices are well thought out and so are the formats of the spots that you've done. they are very consistant, and that's pretty important. i agree with dan about the text being sort of crammed on the half page. and if i were you, i'd put some more detail into the flowers on that page, or rather treat them the same as you did the figures on top of them. nice work though
kerry
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