this is what i have from the third grouping of the deceased which includes Aaron Spelling, Al Lewis, Kirby Puckett, Shelley Winters, Dennis Weaver, and Irving Layton.
Ok, I like the "purple ghost" approach you're giving these. The likeness on each are ok except for the kirby pucket which stands out as being a little better than the rest. Try to think of a context for them that will sort of ground them. Like a grave stone that has something significant about their life etched into it or something. Sharpen up the likEness and give them context. The approach is good. Also you need to do a sketch for the half page. Fix these up and they'll do.
-danny baskin
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Ok, I like the "purple ghost" approach you're giving these. The likeness on each are ok except for the kirby pucket which stands out as being a little better than the rest. Try to think of a context for them that will sort of ground them. Like a grave stone that has something significant about their life etched into it or something. Sharpen up the likEness and give them context. The approach is good. Also you need to do a sketch for the half page. Fix these up and they'll do.
-------->d.
To clarify though, I think these need some work for Wednesday.
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