Tim, the portraits are really fun! Best humans I've seen you do. Good stuff. Now you need to concentrate on making the finals as loose and natural looking. Your use of color has improved a lot too! The half page is kind of empty. Try adding more ivy or something to make the composition a little more dynamic.
In addition to what Dan said, maybe you should extend some of the foliage around the grave, or find some way to frame it so that it isn't falling right off the page (the empty space at the bottom detracts from the composition)
I like how you incorporated the text into the last portrait, maybe you should try something similiar with the others
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Tim, the portraits are really fun! Best humans I've seen you do. Good stuff. Now you need to concentrate on making the finals as loose and natural looking. Your use of color has improved a lot too! The half page is kind of empty. Try adding more ivy or something to make the composition a little more dynamic.
good stuff,
----->d.
Way to put the fun back in funeral
In addition to what Dan said, maybe you should extend some of the foliage around the grave, or find some way to frame it so that it isn't falling right off the page (the empty space at the bottom detracts from the composition)
I like how you incorporated the text into the last portrait, maybe you should try something similiar with the others
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