Erik, I think the backpack one looks really good now. As for the other, I think there are two, possibly three issues going on here. I think you should work on making the lady look a little prettier in the face. She's kinda awkward looking. I think you should consider the cropping a little. I also think that if you include the newspaper box we should see something relevant to the piece in the headline on the papers inside of it. Something like "Communication is key to a healthy relationship", or something else that is clever and not as lame as what I just said. (i just laughed when I imagined it could say "Walkie Talkies are Awesome") Anyway, they're looking a lot better so far.
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Erik, I think the backpack one looks really good now. As for the other, I think there are two, possibly three issues going on here. I think you should work on making the lady look a little prettier in the face. She's kinda awkward looking. I think you should consider the cropping a little. I also think that if you include the newspaper box we should see something relevant to the piece in the headline on the papers inside of it. Something like "Communication is key to a healthy relationship", or something else that is clever and not as lame as what I just said. (i just laughed when I imagined it could say "Walkie Talkies are Awesome") Anyway, they're looking a lot better so far.
--->daniel
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