Hey George, this is a nice idea, but it's going to need a lot more detail before the ruin reads as the ruin of a movie theater. It doesn't especially read as such right now. A lot of times with ruins the structure is still intact and you can easily imagine how things fit together. So I think, structurally, the drawing needs to be a bit more solid. Sepia-toned or thereabouts sounds good, though.
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Hey George, this is a nice idea, but it's going to need a lot more detail before the ruin reads as the ruin of a movie theater. It doesn't especially read as such right now. A lot of times with ruins the structure is still intact and you can easily imagine how things fit together. So I think, structurally, the drawing needs to be a bit more solid. Sepia-toned or thereabouts sounds good, though.
I'm with Sam on this one, George. We'll need lots o' details on those ruins. Take care to include curtains, rows of seats, maybe an animal or two?
---->d.
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