Sunday, February 25, 2007

ashley

after a few late night brainstorming sessions with friends we came up with a retirement home theme instead of the forest. im a little unsure but excited about the text, i've never really illustrated text before.
old people are tons of fun to draw, hehe. oh and i think im going to give flat color a try this time around.




2 comments:

fashionillustrationclass said...

I think the spots look pretty good so far, but the images should be less of a focus. The type is the central image. The full page isn't really working for me. It's kind of cluttered and compositionally dull. Also, I think the pieces are way too similar. I wish you'd done noises from more varied sources and not tried to stay in this retirement home theme. The assignment isn't supposed to be that narrative.

---->d.

fashionillustrationclass said...

You know, on second thought, I may have been a little hasty. The full page isn't too bad now that I look at it a second time. Just bump up those noises.

--->d.