For the first one: the guy's glasses make him look old... consider exchanging them for some trendy rims, or maybe not including them for the other one: hahahaaaa
I think that first one is really cute. Perhaps try playing with the thickness of the line in a few parts, I think some thick lines in a few places would do nicely.
hey danny, i agree with darcey about the glasses in the first piece, and i would also work on the light track above their heads...it looks unstable, and that would dangerous... the second piece is pretty fuckin cool actually....i like your idea, the font, and i'm also excited about the elbows
Ok these are better. Seriously weird and not exactly appropriate, but better. Think about those environments (or lack of) some more. Also clothes. The glasses ARE oldish. Even crazy speaker face needs some cool threads. wtf.
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For the first one: the guy's glasses make him look old... consider exchanging them for some trendy rims, or maybe not including them
for the other one: hahahaaaa
I think that first one is really cute. Perhaps try playing with the thickness of the line in a few parts, I think some thick lines in a few places would do nicely.
also, that second one freaks me the fuck out.
that speaker in the face thing is really creepy Oo
cute cartooning style though. Nice elbows.
-Rachel
hey danny, i agree with darcey about the glasses in the first piece, and i would also work on the light track above their heads...it looks unstable, and that would dangerous...
the second piece is pretty fuckin cool actually....i like your idea, the font, and i'm also excited about the elbows
I wish the first one was as weird as the other one! and sweet elbows by the way
Ok these are better. Seriously weird and not exactly appropriate, but better. Think about those environments (or lack of) some more. Also clothes. The glasses ARE oldish. Even crazy speaker face needs some cool threads. wtf.
-------->d.
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