Ok, these are much better. On the top one I think you should try to make her "caressing him" hand a little more open and less "grippy". The bottom one could use a little more emotion, and mood/theme. They seem kinda cold (and not in the winter way). Good stuff, keep going.
I find the highlights on the green blanket in the top piece are too polygonal to be so bright. It gets distractingly pointy. But I think if they were darker it wouldn't be a problem. Otherwise, it looks pretty good.
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Ok, these are much better. On the top one I think you should try to make her "caressing him" hand a little more open and less "grippy". The bottom one could use a little more emotion, and mood/theme. They seem kinda cold (and not in the winter way). Good stuff, keep going.
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I find the highlights on the green blanket in the top piece are too polygonal to be so bright. It gets distractingly pointy. But I think if they were darker it wouldn't be a problem.
Otherwise, it looks pretty good.
on the top one the figures have an weird slant going on. try turning her very slightly or moving him more toward the right (his left)
opps...I keep forgetting to put my name on my comments *points up*
Rachel
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