hey peter, i really like your idea for the two way radio with the maze. the composition flows pretty nice and the hints of red make it feel kinda um...romantic. anyway, i do think they could look a little more in love though, cuz right now they're kinda lacking an expression and the girl might even look mad that she's holding this radio thing that was just given to her. can't blame her, i would be mad too. as for your xbox piece, i like it, but i'm much more excited about the other piece. i think it's the way you exaggerated some of the features, like the girls extremely long hair and maze torso. if you could somehow incorporate some of those elements into the xbox piece, that might make it all the more stronger. just suggestions, hope they helped. peace
I really like the maze idea. But I think you could do more with their expressions to reveal that they are madly in love. Because they are madly in love, Peter.
I agree the maze concept is strong, and I really like how you've framed it with her hair. I'm interested to see where you take it with color.. the singular red line with the hearts against the white is working nicely already.
Peter! I love the one at the bottom (with the exception of their expressions). I don't like the one at the top. You need to work the samw sort of approach into it somehow. They're just to different in contrast. Figure out a way to incorperate your sense of design into it. Also, I might like the idea of just using red and white (maybe one or two other colors). Find reference for pallette. Lookin good!
Hello Peter, like everyone has said already the piece on the bottom looks very good. I like that you have taken a product that is not very exciting and made an interesting drawing with it. It looks almost like a t-shirt graphic. The one for the Xbox is slightly dull but the product is more exciting so keep that in mined.----erik
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hey peter, i really like your idea for the two way radio with the maze. the composition flows pretty nice and the hints of red make it feel kinda um...romantic. anyway, i do think they could look a little more in love though, cuz right now they're kinda lacking an expression and the girl might even look mad that she's holding this radio thing that was just given to her. can't blame her, i would be mad too. as for your xbox piece, i like it, but i'm much more excited about the other piece. i think it's the way you exaggerated some of the features, like the girls extremely long hair and maze torso. if you could somehow incorporate some of those elements into the xbox piece, that might make it all the more stronger. just suggestions, hope they helped.
peace
peter you smell delicious.
I really like the maze idea. But I think you could do more with their expressions to reveal that they are madly in love. Because they are madly in love, Peter.
Hi Peter,
I agree the maze concept is strong, and I really like how you've framed it with her hair.
I'm interested to see where you take it with color.. the singular red line with the hearts against the white is working nicely already.
-George
Peter! I love the one at the bottom (with the exception of their expressions). I don't like the one at the top. You need to work the samw sort of approach into it somehow. They're just to different in contrast. Figure out a way to incorperate your sense of design into it. Also, I might like the idea of just using red and white (maybe one or two other colors). Find reference for pallette. Lookin good!
---->d.
Hello Peter, like everyone has said already the piece on the bottom looks very good. I like that you have taken a product that is not very exciting and made an interesting drawing with it. It looks almost like a t-shirt graphic. The one for the Xbox is slightly dull but the product is more exciting so keep that in mined.----erik
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