I love this so far. I think the way you've planned your compositions and your type placement are very smart! Think about the size of the type in your full page. I think it could stand to fill the page a little more. Also, if you do the lion make those purrs bigger!
I'm really into the ringmaster you've got going. Especially his crazy ears. His gesture in the cannon piece is great, too. I'm not sure about the sound that the elephant is making. As ridiculous as it sounds, the best way to figure out sounds is to try and make them yourself. Elephant might be, "Tphfeee." Not sure.
im liking it. i agree that the spots could fill the page more and also, there is something about the banner on the title one that throws me off. it might be that the two sides are not even or it might be that a big word like "onomotap...whatever" is a hard word to grasp when written. -danny
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I love this so far. I think the way you've planned your compositions and your type placement are very smart! Think about the size of the type in your full page. I think it could stand to fill the page a little more. Also, if you do the lion make those purrs bigger!
---->d.
I'm really into the ringmaster you've got going. Especially his crazy ears. His gesture in the cannon piece is great, too. I'm not sure about the sound that the elephant is making. As ridiculous as it sounds, the best way to figure out sounds is to try and make them yourself. Elephant might be, "Tphfeee." Not sure.
im liking it. i agree that the spots could fill the page more and also, there is something about the banner on the title one that throws me off. it might be that the two sides are not even or it might be that a big word like "onomotap...whatever" is a hard word to grasp when written.
-danny
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