I like the space in these but I'm a little concerned about the fact that these are 4x5 pieces. How are you going to show which products are which from that far away in such a small piece?
i agree. also, the angle of the top one is a bit confusing for me at first glance. after a bit of staring it made sense but flipping through a magazine quickly, people might not read the space too well. but maybe after more detail is added, it will change that. -danny
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I like the space in these but I'm a little concerned about the fact that these are 4x5 pieces. How are you going to show which products are which from that far away in such a small piece?
--robbie
i agree. also, the angle of the top one is a bit confusing for me at first glance. after a bit of staring it made sense but flipping through a magazine quickly, people might not read the space too well. but maybe after more detail is added, it will change that.
-danny
Beautiful painting here. I too am a little concerned with seeing the products. Can we get a little closer and still preserve the sensetivity?
----->d.
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