Ok, this guy is in an empty movie theater and the same thing that is on the screen is also on his ipod, I don’t think im going to keep the stupid looking movie on the screen and ipod I will probably change it before the final.
Nice start, Erik. I would actually like to see the movie screen and seats through a door and maybe have the guy in the lobby watching on his ipod. I think that would make the composition more interesting, as it's a little plain right now.
Also, I know there are green ipods, but I'd make it white. I think a white ipod is infinitely more recognizable than a green one.
I think the article mentioned something about the quality of movies declining recently, and I think you can have fun with that when deciding what to put on the screens.
I think Sam's right once again. You really need to consider this composition, and don't get lazy with that background. Also, the crayola palette is pretty abysmal. ALSO, you need something better on that screen. That head isn't doing it. Think hard about the content and have fun with it. If you put him in the lobby you could do a bunch of posters for movies that look lame.
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Nice start, Erik. I would actually like to see the movie screen and seats through a door and maybe have the guy in the lobby watching on his ipod. I think that would make the composition more interesting, as it's a little plain right now.
Also, I know there are green ipods, but I'd make it white. I think a white ipod is infinitely more recognizable than a green one.
I think the article mentioned something about the quality of movies declining recently, and I think you can have fun with that when deciding what to put on the screens.
I think Sam's right once again. You really need to consider this composition, and don't get lazy with that background. Also, the crayola palette is pretty abysmal. ALSO, you need something better on that screen. That head isn't doing it. Think hard about the content and have fun with it. If you put him in the lobby you could do a bunch of posters for movies that look lame.
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