Everybody knows Dinosaurs breathe fire and have laser vision. It's science.
Furthermore, I think you should edit the Ooze piece and have the sound as the person falling down the stairs. My rationale for this is that all three of your sounds are very liquidy and have a similar sensibility to them because of that. I am very partial to people who, for one reason or another, end up with cephalopods on their heads. Florble is probably the most accurate onomatopoeia i've ever seen.
the imagery is great but i think the placement of the words could be thought out a bit more. and im gonna agree with sam that that is the exact sound of jello molds. -danny
I think that you should make the image/text work together as well in all of them as it does in the ooze one. These are all wicked though. Excellent work. Fill that full page up with larger type. Work it into the composition.
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That's ridiculous.
Everybody knows Dinosaurs breathe fire and have laser vision. It's science.
Furthermore, I think you should edit the Ooze piece and have the sound as the person falling down the stairs. My rationale for this is that all three of your sounds are very liquidy and have a similar sensibility to them because of that. I am very partial to people who, for one reason or another, end up with cephalopods on their heads. Florble is probably the most accurate onomatopoeia i've ever seen.
the imagery is great but i think the placement of the words could be thought out a bit more. and im gonna agree with sam that that is the exact sound of jello molds.
-danny
FLORBLE must be done. No way around that.
I think that you should make the image/text work together as well in all of them as it does in the ooze one. These are all wicked though. Excellent work. Fill that full page up with larger type. Work it into the composition.
----->d.
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